# This is much better than my 1st attempt!

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/this-is-much-better-than-my-1st-attempt/118
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**Created:** [July 5, 2002, 9:40pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/this-is-much-better-than-my-1st-attempt/118 "2002-07-05T21:40:32Z")
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### Author: ![emm\_eye](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/e/22d042/32.png) [@emm\_eye](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/emm_eye)
#### Post date: [July 5, 2002, 9:40pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/this-is-much-better-than-my-1st-attempt/118/1 "2002-07-05T21:40:32Z")

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hi!!!  
i just got my new site uploaded!!

[http://www.dreamdrive.cjb.net](http://www.dreamdrive.cjb.net)

is it worth gettin through SOTW.

do give mee some feedback!!

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### Author: ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 19, 2002, 7:58pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/this-is-much-better-than-my-1st-attempt/118/2 "2002-07-19T19:58:11Z")

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It’s not bad, but I think there are things that you can improve about the design. I don’t know, it’s a general feeling : the text is too big, and to me there are too many things on the screen.  
Well, that’s just my opinion.

Good luck to you !

pom :asian: