# Tshirt design. need critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/tshirt-design-need-critique/270741>\
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**Created:** [September 13, 2008, 7:34am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/tshirt-design-need-critique/270741 "2008-09-13T07:34:00Z")\
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**Author:** ![fullofebak](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/f/87869e/32.png) [@fullofebak](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/fullofebak)\
**Post date:** [September 13, 2008, 7:34am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/tshirt-design-need-critique/270741/1 "2008-09-13T07:34:00Z")

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Hi! this is tshirt design for non profit org that wants to promote eco tourism. their logo is a “sandal”.

the concept is, with every step, u get to go to beautiful islands.

what do u guys think about it. is it clear? how can it be improved?  
thanks!

[[COLOR=#333333]http://www.freewebs.com/mindful1983/critique/ytrip1.jpg[/COLOR]](http://www.freewebs.com/mindful1983/critique/ytrip1.jpg)

this is the original

[[COLOR=#333333]http://www.freewebs.com/mindful1983/critique/ytrip2.jpg[/COLOR]](http://www.freewebs.com/mindful1983/critique/ytrip2.jpg)

this is with water.

:rocker: