# Up and coming:

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/up-and-coming/17788>\
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**Created:** [April 9, 2003, 8:02am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/up-and-coming/17788 "2003-04-09T08:02:56Z")\
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**Author:** ![xmattx](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/x/6de8d8/32.png) [@xmattx](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/xmattx)\
**Post date:** [April 9, 2003, 8:02am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/up-and-coming/17788/1 "2003-04-09T08:02:56Z")

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v2. of a site ive been working with/on…

this is at the very first developing stages and id like to hear the comments advice of those that are intrested in design, and the general public on these boards;

havent really thought about navigation yet, you can look at the current site to see the content: [http://www.thehospitalboston.com](http://www.thehospitalboston.com)

and the in works v.2 draft:  
[http://www.intrinsicmediainc.com/test/2.htm](http://www.intrinsicmediainc.com/test/2.htm)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [April 9, 2003, 11:04am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/up-and-coming/17788/2 "2003-04-09T11:04:10Z")

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First link is broken…

Second link:

1. Get rid of the gap at the top of the layout, looks wierd.

2. I guess you’re still working on the navigation so I’m assuming those dropdown menus are temporarily. Let’s hope so because they’re killing your layout.

3. There isn’t much to critique on now, but it could use more content and effects or graphics, just too empty right now.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [April 11, 2003, 9:39pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/up-and-coming/17788/3 "2003-04-11T21:39:29Z")

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I like the colours on the second version. The “no war” thing is well done…  
I don’t have too much problems with the gap on top, but with:

[a] The dark green section on the left side, bottom. I know the text was supposed to be “incomplete”… like, hidden a bit, but it looks weird.

\*\* The drop-down navigation, like EG said.

Good luck :rambo: