# Vector critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/vector-critique/182731>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [March 21, 2006, 2:04am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/vector-critique/182731 "2006-03-21T02:04:41Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 11\
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**Author:** ![dravalanche](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/8797f3/32.png) [@dravalanche](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/dravalanche)\
**Post date:** [March 21, 2006, 2:04am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/vector-critique/182731/1 "2006-03-21T02:04:41Z")

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this is a vector image im making for a class project.

it might be a tad jaggered as it’s a jpeg.  
tell me what you think

[http://img238.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dgmag11xx.jpg](http://img238.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dgmag11xx.jpg)

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**Author:** ![matthewjumps](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/49beb7/32.png) [@matthewjumps](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/matthewjumps)\
**Post date:** [March 21, 2006, 2:12am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/vector-critique/182731/2 "2006-03-21T02:12:22Z")

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nice :thumb:

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**Author:** ![Sciurus](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/eb9ed0/32.png) [@Sciurus](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Sciurus)\
**Post date:** [March 21, 2006, 4:10am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/vector-critique/182731/3 "2006-03-21T04:10:28Z")

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Well done. Is it only with vectors, or did you use other things too?

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**Author:** ![Pixeladdict](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/c89c15/32.png) [@Pixeladdict](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Pixeladdict)\
**Post date:** [March 21, 2006, 9:00am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/vector-critique/182731/4 "2006-03-21T09:00:53Z")

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It looks great.

Although, and I have no clue how these images are done, so correct me if Im wrong, I think that the ear and the hair still looks like the real photo you are making the vector image from. Make it more 2D.

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**Author:** ![hybrid101](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/7993a0/32.png) [@hybrid101](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/hybrid101)\
**Post date:** [March 21, 2006, 10:41am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/vector-critique/182731/5 "2006-03-21T10:41:37Z")

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upload the swf:) so we could get all of it in detail:) looks awesome!

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**Author:** ![guinness](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/g/e495f1/32.png) [@guinness](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/guinness)\
**Post date:** [March 22, 2006, 4:57am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/vector-critique/182731/6 "2006-03-22T04:57:02Z")

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post an outline version

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**Author:** ![leisuresuitlissy](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/leisuresuitlissy/32/2109_2.png) [@leisuresuitlissy](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/leisuresuitlissy)\
**Post date:** [March 22, 2006, 5:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/vector-critique/182731/7 "2006-03-22T05:16:22Z")

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Looks fantastic - what was the brief?

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**Author:** ![anon1712571](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/9dc877/32.png) [@anon1712571](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/anon1712571)\
**Post date:** [March 22, 2006, 7:19am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/vector-critique/182731/8 "2006-03-22T07:19:00Z")

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nice! 😃

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**Author:** ![dravalanche](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/8797f3/32.png) [@dravalanche](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/dravalanche)\
**Post date:** [March 23, 2006, 12:26am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/vector-critique/182731/9 "2006-03-23T00:26:35Z")

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It was made with illustrator with just vectors. It’s for the DG magazine competition and my teacher is making us enter it.

here’s a newer version.

[http://img467.imageshack.us/my.php?image=outlinedg6cn.jpg](http://img467.imageshack.us/my.php?image=outlinedg6cn.jpg)

here’s the outline version.

[http://img462.imageshack.us/my.php?image=outline1oz.jpg](http://img462.imageshack.us/my.php?image=outline1oz.jpg)

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**Author:** ![daleth](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/daleth/32/1096_2.png) [@daleth](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/daleth)\
**Post date:** [March 23, 2006, 5:26am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/vector-critique/182731/10 "2006-03-23T05:26:18Z")

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Pretty awesome man! Though, that purple for the cover design is killing me! Are you sure about that color? And the type and general attitude kind of messes with the wonderful simplicity of the original (red) image. I would contrast the “shocked” expression of the figure with a subtle, composed type instead of some kind of “b horror movie” knockoff 🙂

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**Author:** ![theflash](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/theflash/32/1221_2.png) [@theflash](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/theflash)\
**Post date:** [March 23, 2006, 8:50am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/vector-critique/182731/11 "2006-03-23T08:50:38Z")

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■■■■ nice… I like the expression…

But can you add more contrast to the image a bit more… so the shading makes it more realistic ??
