# Website critique

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/website-critique/234000
**Category:** Uncategorized
**Created:** [July 29, 2007, 12:10pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/website-critique/234000 "2007-07-29T12:10:13Z")
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### Author: ![dravalanche](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/8797f3/32.png) [@dravalanche](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/dravalanche)
#### Post date: [July 29, 2007, 12:10pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/website-critique/234000/1 "2007-07-29T12:10:13Z")

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hey all.  
Some E commerce want me to do a layout design for some site they’re making. It’s a dirtbike tyre shop.

Here’s the site they have now.  
[http://www.motoz.com.au/Design.html](http://www.motoz.com.au/Design.html)

Here’s a site they really like and want theirs to be like.  
[http://www.gtyre.com/home.html](http://www.gtyre.com/home.html)

They want a grunge look to their site ( a clean grunge look I guess)

Here’s what I have so far. It needs some oomph though. Any suggestions?  
 ![](http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/3833/layout26yt0.jpg)