# Website critique

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/website-critique/266356
**Category:** Uncategorized
**Created:** [July 18, 2008, 7:50pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/website-critique/266356 "2008-07-18T19:50:30Z")
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### Author: ![temjin](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/5f9b8f/32.png) [@temjin](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/temjin)
#### Post date: [July 18, 2008, 7:50pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/website-critique/266356/1 "2008-07-18T19:50:30Z")

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ello, my name is Dennis Scott. I am new to all flash sites. This is my first attempt. I made a site for a friend of mine (she is an artist) Here is the site I made for her.  
[www.sarahlochtest.freeweb7.com](http://www.sarahlochtest.freeweb7.com)

Please tell me what you think. NO NEED TO BE GENTLE. It still needs some polishing but would appreciate if you told me what to polish:)

(Oh and “Galerie” is NOT misspelled. Thats the way that gallery spells it on their sign)