# What about this? **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [May 26, 2003, 2:19am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/what-about-this/21754 "2003-05-26T02:19:50Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 12\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![cmxd](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/46a35a/32.png) [@cmxd](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/cmxd)\ **Post date:** [May 26, 2003, 2:19am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/what-about-this/21754/1 "2003-05-26T02:19:50Z")
Hi dudes, What about this one. www.valid.com.pk Thanks ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 26, 2003, 3:43am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/what-about-this/21754/2 "2003-05-26T03:43:40Z")
Very nice. 🙂 Good Work. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 26, 2003, 9:31am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/what-about-this/21754/3 "2003-05-26T09:31:19Z")
Nice colors, but the overall design is inconsistent. There are a lot of negative spaces and the layout shifts and changes from each section. For example the navbar jumps from the center to the top. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 26, 2003, 1:50pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/what-about-this/21754/4 "2003-05-26T13:50:17Z")
catalogue is spelt catalogue btw 😉 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 28, 2003, 12:17am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/what-about-this/21754/5 "2003-05-28T00:17:02Z")
> \*Originally posted by asphaltcowboy \* > \*\*catalogue is spelt catalogue btw 😉 \*\* i don’t get it:-\ ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 28, 2003, 12:30am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/what-about-this/21754/6 "2003-05-28T00:30:32Z")
in the contact section, im guessing what’s supposed to be the submit button after the form is blank. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 28, 2003, 2:02am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/what-about-this/21754/7 "2003-05-28T02:02:51Z")
asphaltcowboy is saying you spelled “catalogue” incorrectly. you spelled it as “catalouge” instead of “catalogue” on the navigation bar you also spelled “procucts” instead of “products” i think your layout is fine…it looks very professional. i must point out that the flash on the “home” page is adding very little though. i would say, either scrap the flash and just go with a straight HTML site or do something more with it. you can get a little drop down menu for products using DHTML…check out [http://www.dynamicdrive.com](http://www.dynamicdrive.com) for some great scripts. -teet ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 28, 2003, 2:03am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/what-about-this/21754/8 "2003-05-28T02:03:58Z")
oh just saw something else the title of most of your pages is “valid\_next.gif” you’ll prolly want to change that. -teet ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [June 1, 2003, 1:11am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/what-about-this/21754/9 "2003-06-01T01:11:11Z")
hmmm…i would try and get your menu text a lil more readable…thats always important to me…it looked a little pixelated and blurry…just a thought. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [June 1, 2003, 1:30am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/what-about-this/21754/10 "2003-06-01T01:30:28Z")
another syntax bug: under the “ABOUT US” page you have the following: “As a member of the global village we view the world from the widest prospective” prospective should read ’ perspective’. In the same paragraph, you wrote: “How we response our customers, influence their belief in our commitment to them.” I can’t be absolutely sure of your intentions, but I ‘think’ that you meant to write something like this… “How we respond to our customers influences their belief in our commitment to them.” Regardles, good work. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [June 1, 2003, 6:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/what-about-this/21754/11 "2003-06-01T06:16:46Z")
Not bad, although it is correct what EG, teet and sketcher said. It full of spelling errors: Procucts, Catalouge, … That makes it’s professionality go way down. You might wanna consider using a frameset too so the top navbar shouldn’t keep reloading. I had the funny feeling that it wasn’t done reloading yet when it was. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [June 1, 2003, 8:47pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/what-about-this/21754/12 "2003-06-01T20:47:31Z")
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