# WIP crit

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/wip-crit/201407>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [September 21, 2006, 12:02am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/wip-crit/201407 "2006-09-21T00:02:18Z")\
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**Author:** ![nige1980](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/n/8dc957/32.png) [@nige1980](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/nige1980)\
**Post date:** [September 21, 2006, 12:02am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/wip-crit/201407/1 "2006-09-21T00:02:18Z")

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A friend of mine asked me to make a website for her to try and promote her as a model/promotions girl.

It’s a very basic page compared to what a lot of the users here could make but I’d really appreciate some guidance/criticism/encouragement (not likely I know!!).

I’d like to do the best job possible for her so if anyone can make some suggestions to improve the layout/colours etc I’d be grateful.

I’d especially like advice on how to improve the EJ logo in the header. I’ve not included the slideshow as I want it to be safe for work!

Many thanks

[http://www.bandits-rugby.co.uk/testzone/](http://www.bandits-rugby.co.uk/testzone/)