# \[WIP\] \[DRAFT 9!\] portfolio layout - needing critiques

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/wip-draft-9-portfolio-layout-needing-critiques/282689>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [February 25, 2009, 9:42am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/wip-draft-9-portfolio-layout-needing-critiques/282689 "2009-02-25T09:42:52Z")\
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**Author:** ![creativeFuzion](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/creativefuzion/32/1385_2.png) [@creativeFuzion](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/creativeFuzion)\
**Post date:** [February 25, 2009, 9:42am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/wip-draft-9-portfolio-layout-needing-critiques/282689/1 "2009-02-25T09:42:52Z")

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Hey! It’s been more than a month… possibly two, since I’ve posted for critiques on my up and coming portfolio/blog.

I last entered here with [draft #8](http://www.fadedelement.com/_wip/faded_element/faded_element_draft_8.jpg), but with insightful comments I went back to the drawing board and started on #9. But all in all, I was not pleased with it, and decided not to post it here. Instead, I gave myself some time to think and reviewed it on my own time. Feel free to look at the progression:

[9a](http://www.fadedelement.com/_wip/faded_element/faded_element_draft_9a.jpg)  
[9b](http://www.fadedelement.com/_wip/faded_element/faded_element_draft_9b.jpg)

Now with 9c coming along well, I wanted to post it here for a critique. I have two variations, [one with the logo and [URL=“http://www.fadedelement.com/\_wip/faded\_element/faded\_element\_draft\_9c.jpg”]another without it](http://www.fadedelement.com/_wip/faded_element/faded_element_draft_9c_logo.jpg).

Honestly, I feel that the title text and/or logo is weak and could improve. I will be focusing on that part soon, please give any tips if you’ve got 'em.

That’s it! Thanks for taking the time to review my site, I look forward to your feedback.

:hugegrin: