# Would love to get some critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/would-love-to-get-some-critique/283427>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [March 5, 2009, 10:58pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/would-love-to-get-some-critique/283427 "2009-03-05T22:58:00Z")\
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**Author:** ![localZero](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/localzero/32/3741_2.png) [@localZero](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/localZero)\
**Post date:** [March 5, 2009, 10:58pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/would-love-to-get-some-critique/283427/1 "2009-03-05T22:58:00Z")

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This mockup is still in it’s demo stage and i’d like to hear what you think about it. If you have any ideas how to improve it or what’s wrong with it, just shoot 😃  
Sorry it’s a DA link 😕 [http://localzero.deviantart.com/art/Finsec-114943495](http://localzero.deviantart.com/art/Finsec-114943495)