# YO! Critique this poster eh?
**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271
**Category:** Uncategorized
**Created:** [July 21, 2004, 3:31am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271 "2004-07-21T03:31:52Z")
**Posts on this page:** 20
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### Author:  [@CanadianGuy](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/CanadianGuy)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 3:31am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/1 "2004-07-21T03:31:52Z")
Hello all,
Well it’s 11:30pm and I just finished (wellllll maybe not) this poster. What’s missing?
Also, don’t bother commenting on the glow around the lettering because this was created at 300dpi and after shrinking this motha down the cool noise effect was lost. 🐇
Thanks
Bill
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 3:36am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/2 "2004-07-21T03:36:51Z")
God! You do print work too?! This is top notch! Very nice, very professional.
Also, I like the details like the “Rated F for Fun”
Good work! I remember that you were working on a layout for this place a while back, is that online yet (if not, is it going to be?).
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 3:39am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/3 "2004-07-21T03:39:22Z")
dam thats nice… when are u going to replace their old site?
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 3:41am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/4 "2004-07-21T03:41:44Z")
yeah I remember the layout too, I love the poster, but it says 99 cents then goes to $5?
perhaps if you want to try something else you might try moving the background down to have less black
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 3:43am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/5 "2004-07-21T03:43:07Z")
lol. Nope it’s not online yet Bradly. These guys were one of my first clients so I give them great prices and they understand that they’re not no.1 on my priorities list simply because of money. Their website is nearly complete and will be launched the second week of August so keep your eyes peeled.
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 3:43am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/6 "2004-07-21T03:43:09Z")
yeah that is confusing…
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 3:43am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/7 "2004-07-21T03:43:48Z")
canadian, u got a portfolio site coming?
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 3:44am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/8 "2004-07-21T03:44:48Z")
As far as I know he has one already, just doesn’t show it on forums 😉
Looks awesome CG 🙂
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 3:45am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/9 "2004-07-21T03:45:56Z")
hehe bombing thanks for pointing that out. I forgot that I had to put in that soft drinks, hot dogs and bowling was only 0.99. I guess that’s what happens at the end of the day.
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 3:46am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/10 "2004-07-21T03:46:44Z")
he he, it’s alright 😛
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 3:47am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/11 "2004-07-21T03:47:17Z")
> [@bombingpixels](#):
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> perhaps if you want to try something else you might try moving the background down to have less black
I wouldn’t do that, I like the balance now. Another thing that I really like is the font that you used. Very movie posterish (I assume that’s the look you were going for, and if you were, you hit it right on the head :D)
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 3:47am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/12 "2004-07-21T03:47:20Z")
CANADIAN DO U HAVE A PORFOLIO SITE OR NOT, sorry for the caps but i see u keep posting and i want to see all ur work…
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 3:48am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/13 "2004-07-21T03:48:28Z")
no
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 3:48am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/14 "2004-07-21T03:48:38Z")
> [@Yeldarb](#):
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> I wouldn’t do that, I like the balance now
just something to try, he did ask for something to try, I know I often have bad ideas, but oh well 😛
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 3:49am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/15 "2004-07-21T03:49:54Z")
well dammit make one lol, i keep seeing these people that read 2 tutorials and make a ‘business’ or ‘portfolio’ site, someone of ur skill should have one… i am searching for inspiration lol
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 3:59am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/16 "2004-07-21T03:59:17Z")
Hey bombing I actually did have it lighter but changed it just minutes ago. I think the darkness of the background will make the text really stand out under the black lights at that bowling centre.
\< unrelated \> While I was working on this poster I spent half the time waiting for my computer to catch up with me. I don’t know what the heck is wrong with my computer. \< /unrelated \>
lol Brad do you mean Harry Potter?
I was totally going for the movie look. Everytime I do work for these guys they fax me a sheet with every thing laid out the way they ‘think’ it should be and I never do it their way. It’s kind of funny that they still do it seeing as I’ve done soo much work for them. lol
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 4:06am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/17 "2004-07-21T04:06:51Z")
Well, Harry Potter wasn’t the first thing that came to my mind, but now that you mention it, that does look a bit like Hogwarts 😉
Oooo, black lights, that will be cool because the white text will glow in the dark 🙂
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 4:10am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/18 "2004-07-21T04:10:07Z")
I guess they like what they get, and figure that if they send you something that’s already really good then you’ll try to do something different and it won’t be as good 😛
ok that didn’t make any sense
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 4:15am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/19 "2004-07-21T04:15:35Z")
lol Bombing.
Brad I still haven’t seen Harry Potter so I have no idea who gogwharts is.
I couldn’t resist attaching this close up of the noise glow around the lettering. I’ve loved this effect for a long time but I’ve never had the opportunity to use it.
Here it is anyways (like anyone cares) :to:
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### Author:  [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)
#### Post date: [July 21, 2004, 4:17am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/20 "2004-07-21T04:17:18Z")
lol. I think I’m going to make a ‘FREAKY’ wallpaper now.
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