# YO! Critique this poster eh?

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**Created:** [July 21, 2004, 3:31am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271 "2004-07-21T03:31:52Z")\
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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 21, 2004, 9:13pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/41 "2004-07-21T21:13:22Z")

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> [@CanadianGuy](#):
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> lol. Simplistik I always thought that S&C was for websites. Your work is **awesome** from what I’ve seen. If you’re hard up for a critique go ahead and pm me when you start a thread.

LoL, thx… I’m never “hard up” for a critique, I just like creative feedback, maybe something I didn’t do that could be done… w/e. You should lounge around S&C now and again, yea i got 74 or so view on my thread and only 4 replys or soemthing like that. I think from now on though I’ll post here in D&D.

I was looking at the flyer, and the noise seems real extreme now, when you look at it as a whole. I almost thought it looked better a little more subtle, and knocked back. Eh, I dunno that’s my .02

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**Post date:** [July 21, 2004, 11:28pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/42 "2004-07-21T23:28:15Z")

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_cries out in agony_ MY EYES! O GOD MY EYES! I CAN’T BELIEVE WHAT I’M READING!

Don’t like the noise eh? \< yosemite sam voice \> OOOO them’s fightin’ words \< / yosemite sam voice \> lol

I really really dig the noise. I mean I’d marry the noise on this piece if I could. lol

Seriously though, I’m going to check out S&C right now and I’d better not find any noise in any of your work. hehe

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [July 22, 2004, 12:13am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/43 "2004-07-22T00:13:09Z")

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I like it more this way :P, don’t you worrry about that noise

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**Post date:** [July 22, 2004, 12:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/44 "2004-07-22T00:16:25Z")

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i think the noise looks good, just weird when its shrunk down lilke that, (i mean when its printed, it will probably look a lot different, and better). What is up with the [www.playtimebowling.com](http://www.playtimebowling.com), that just looks wierd, i like just plain white text personally…

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**Post date:** [July 22, 2004, 12:19am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/45 "2004-07-22T00:19:52Z")

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o and simplistik, do have links to any of your work… i mean all ur sites just have splash pages, do you have anywork i could see (battles, sites, print, etc.)? Sorry for being off topic.

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**Post date:** [July 22, 2004, 12:33am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/46 "2004-07-22T00:33:14Z")

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looks like a movie poster or somthin

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**Post date:** [July 22, 2004, 12:51am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/47 "2004-07-22T00:51:21Z")

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> [@mlkedave](#):
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> o and simplistik, do have links to any of your work… i mean all ur sites just have splash pages, do you have anywork i could see (battles, sites, print, etc.)? Sorry for being off topic.

I have a logo sheet (about 1/10 or less of all my work) and what not that I put together for 2 ppl that wanted to battle me:  
[http://www.beyondthepixel.com/images/samples.jpg](http://www.beyondthepixel.com/images/samples.jpg)

some other stuff I’ve done I’ve posted here b4:  
[http://www.beyondthepixel.com/images/toi\_new.jpg](http://www.beyondthepixel.com/images/toi_new.jpg)  
[http://www.beyondthepixel.com/images/Not\_the\_Knoll.jpg](http://www.beyondthepixel.com/images/Not_the_Knoll.jpg)  
[http://www.beyondthepixel.com/clients/flashskinz](http://www.beyondthepixel.com/clients/flashskinz)  
[http://www.beyondthepixel.com/clients/flashskinz/main.html](http://www.beyondthepixel.com/clients/flashskinz/main.html) \<–under cont.

anywho, I’ve got lots of stuff I just don’t advertise. I put my stuff up in S&C if you just want to look at some of my posts. most of my portfolio is for Reebok which I’m under a NDA. But DDD can vouch for me too 🙂

As for the noise, yea… sorry :(. I may start a thread in S&C and dedicate it to a image I do w/ all noise :). I did notice something else, is there a slight dropshadow under the words? If so I like that, makes it pop off the design, and makes it look better, if not must be my eyes, and maybe you should think about a dropshadow, LoL.

I think the movie poster looks is what he was goin for

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**Post date:** [July 22, 2004, 6:00pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/48 "2004-07-22T18:00:07Z")

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lol mlkdave for the record I didn’t create that website.

Yea there is a slight drop shadow on the lettering. The $0.99 was created after finishing the freaky friday lettering and if you look closely you can see I had some trouble matching them up.

I remember seeing some of your reebok work and it was really cool.

S&C really is dead. It’s a shame when such nice work doesn’t get commented on [http://www.kirupaforum.com/forums/showthread.php?p=579543#post579543](http://www.kirupaforum.com/forums/showthread.php?p=579543#post579543)

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**Post date:** [July 22, 2004, 6:20pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/49 "2004-07-22T18:20:17Z")

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Nice Work CG,  
just the text located on the bottom, is to impacted. But otherwise awsome work 🙂

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**Post date:** [July 22, 2004, 9:34pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/50 "2004-07-22T21:34:41Z")

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i say that CG, Simplistik, MLK, Ethan, and I form some sort of Coalition for something…something having to do with art…

who’s with me

😛

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**Post date:** [July 22, 2004, 9:36pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/51 "2004-07-22T21:36:47Z")

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Do we have a secret handshake? If so I’m in.

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**Post date:** [July 23, 2004, 12:05am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/52 "2004-07-23T00:05:38Z")

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> [@EthanM](#):
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> Do we have a secret handshake? If so I’m in.

I think the more important question is… do we get donations?

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**Post date:** [July 23, 2004, 12:07am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/53 "2004-07-23T00:07:27Z")

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yes we do have a secret handshake - it looks like a laser show - you see we have to hold our optical mice(get one if you dont have one) while doing it

donations? hmmm… i like your thinking.

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**Post date:** [July 23, 2004, 12:19am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/54 "2004-07-23T00:19:15Z")

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I don’t know PR? I’m sooo busy with my duties as K-Team Non-Affiliated Cult Member 6 // Senior Mountie Soul Reaper. lol

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**Post date:** [July 23, 2004, 12:28am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/55 "2004-07-23T00:28:26Z")

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You can imagine how busy I get being the leader of that cult… pure exhaustion.

PR. I’m laser shaking your hand right now… wooo

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**Post date:** [July 23, 2004, 12:38am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/yo-critique-this-poster-eh/58271/56 "2004-07-23T00:38:12Z")

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mmm do they have…

![](http://www.minid.net/archivos/dr-evil.jpg)

lasers in their mouses?

\*soulty i see you!!!

you are in too bud!

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