# Your Criticism Please

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/your-criticism-please/229596>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [June 18, 2007, 9:05pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/your-criticism-please/229596 "2007-06-18T21:05:29Z")\
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**Author:** ![Zaiah](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/z/eb9ed0/32.png) [@Zaiah](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Zaiah)\
**Post date:** [June 18, 2007, 9:05pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/your-criticism-please/229596/1 "2007-06-18T21:05:29Z")

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Hey all,

I have put a little time into a banner for my boss. It’s for an engineering and consultanting firm. So it can’t be too wild. I did it in GIMP. I usually use Fireworks or PS, but he doesn’t have either here at the office and I refuse to do this at home. Please let me know what you think. All criticism will be taken into consideration. I’m a newbie so please don’t hold back. But please offer some suggestions to make it better.

Thanks!

[![](http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/4715/banner1dj8.th.jpg)](http://img393.imageshack.us/my.php?image=banner1dj8.jpg)[/IMG]

[![](http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/722/banner2kx2.th.jpg)](http://img518.imageshack.us/my.php?image=banner2kx2.jpg)[/IMG]

These are the first two I mocked up.