# Zawdie site **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [July 29, 2003, 7:21pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/zawdie-site/27055 "2003-07-29T19:21:59Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 12\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![worm](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/worm/32/235_2.png) [@worm](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/worm)\ **Post date:** [July 29, 2003, 7:21pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/zawdie-site/27055/1 "2003-07-29T19:21:59Z")
okay, check out my site and lemme know what u think. [www.zawdie.com/test/zawdie3update.html](http://www.zawdie.com/test/zawdie3update.html) all constuctive comments are acceptable ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 29, 2003, 11:01pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/zawdie-site/27055/2 "2003-07-29T23:01:48Z")
What u’ve done so far is good but what i’d suggest is this. 1. How about a little intro to grab the users attention before loading the main content. 2. Transitions, doesnt have to be fancy. 3. use Dynamic text boxes intead of Static (looks sharper). ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 29, 2003, 11:08pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/zawdie-site/27055/3 "2003-07-29T23:08:44Z")
thanx, dynamic text does look sharper but i want to have color on specific words (for emphasis). Can this b done with dynamic txt. The transition idea will b taken into consideration. Cant say i will definately **will** use it though due to time constraints(wanna replace the actual site soon). thnx mang ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 29, 2003, 11:14pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/zawdie-site/27055/4 "2003-07-29T23:14:04Z")
I’m almost certain you can. 😃 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 30, 2003, 3:41pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/zawdie-site/27055/5 "2003-07-30T15:41:56Z")
how? anybody? ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 31, 2003, 1:54am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/zawdie-site/27055/6 "2003-07-31T01:54:13Z")
I like the image and the nav, I think that on mouse over its very hard to read the text, maybe a shadow would help! I would design 6 big images like this, and then change them as u interact between the sections. I like this font on ur header much more then the one on the site that says Hybrid Creativity…is that slogan or a name of the studio? or is ZAWDIE the studio logo? I’m confused! great start peace:P ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 31, 2003, 12:40pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/zawdie-site/27055/7 "2003-07-31T12:40:04Z")
Your site is very good but portfolio section takes a lotta time to load. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 31, 2003, 12:45pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/zawdie-site/27055/8 "2003-07-31T12:45:14Z")
Here are the things I noticed: 1. Your content is scattered everywhere. You should try to organize and create a cleaner layout. 2. Also your choices of colors aren’t too good either, they’re not working well with each other. 3. Body text is a bit blurry as well. 4. The white bottom half is killing your design so you might want to redesign this layout. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 31, 2003, 3:36pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/zawdie-site/27055/9 "2003-07-31T15:36:15Z")
> \*Originally posted by electrongeek \* > \*\*Here are the things I noticed: 1. Your content is scattered everywhere. You should try to organize and create a cleaner layout. Do you mean in terms of the flash content on top above the html text at the bottom of the page? if u do, then i definately spotted that! will get to it soon. > 1. Also your choices of colors aren’t too good either, they’re not working well with each other. lol. and to think i thought this was a fly color scheme. come to think of it, it does look a bit dark. > 1. Body text is a bit blurry as well. nuff said, i think i need to edit the amount of text i hav in there > 1. The white bottom half is killing your design so you might want to redesign this layout. \*\* thnx 4 the advice yall! subjectivity is a beeatch! lol :sure: :trout: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 31, 2003, 3:38pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/zawdie-site/27055/10 "2003-07-31T15:38:30Z")
> Your site is very good but portfolio section takes a lotta time to load. are u on 56k? either way, i’ll look into that! thnx mang! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 31, 2003, 3:43pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/zawdie-site/27055/11 "2003-07-31T15:43:25Z")
> I like the image and the nav, I think that on mouse over its very hard to read the text, maybe a shadow would help! I would design 6 big images like this, and then change them as u interact between the sections. I like this font on ur header much more then the one on the site that says Hybrid Creativity…is that slogan or a name of the studio? or is ZAWDIE the studio logo? I’m confused! great start peace The 'hybrid creativity" bit is the slogan. thats y i faded it a bit. maybe some more alpha will do the trick. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [July 31, 2003, 8:07pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/zawdie-site/27055/12 "2003-07-31T20:07:33Z")
u can try 😛