3d tt

this is my first ever attempt at 3D. I am posting this now, cos I think I need to start over, and hopefully the things I have learnt from this one will help the next be better. what do you think for a first try?

http://www.far-site.co.uk/test.avi

UPDATE - This is my new one, I think its better, on with the detail!

This is the unsmoothed

comments, suggestions, compliments and criticisms all invited.
thanks.