Updated 4/23: After the initial responses, I’ve made some major changes to flow of the game. The game now evolves through a series of missions (currently 6). Before I continue with the current storyline/design I want to get some reaction to it’s current incarnation (if you find yourself in a star system with no warp nexus, you’re done with the existing missions).
I’d love to get feedback (whether or not you saw the first version):
http://lab.wx3.com/dreadnought/
Username: game
Password: player
Feel free to make any comments/suggestions/criticism that you think might be helpful, and thanks in advance!