C&C Please :)

Ive been working on these two images for a while now (for fun mind you) and I’ve kind of come to a stump. Somethings about it just dont look right and i was hoping some of you could steer me in the right direction.
-Any comments welcome!

ill work with one piece at a time here…i had a little change in directin with where the image can go, here’s what ive tried out: