Critique my site

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hi , im pretty new to flash , and theres nothing especially great about my site except maybe the nice art thats has been hand painted by myself and a friend of mine …

this is a mod site , and contains no violence or any other censorable content ; except the design document page (“design”) contains references to weaponry .

so with that out of the way , the site is here :
http://www.dimmy.biz/ransomfocus.html

please feel free to give suggestions or talk about things that are wrong about the page ( the music may not suit all fans either ) .

thanks , Dimz

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both myself and reefster have now offered tutes to help this guy out and i feel confident that things will improve greatly from this moment forward. Ok guys, lets all take a backstep and let the dude remake the site which i feel he will greatly enjoy doing.

Flash is always a constant learning curve and can be at many times very frustrating especially when it comes to using scripts like php etc

when the new design is made - please post it on this thread because if you don’t i might not see it :slight_smile:

good luck new flasher :slight_smile: