Critique my work please

Hello guys. I’m relatively new to these forums, but i’ve visited kirupa every once in a while. Anyway, i’m hoping that you guys could constructively criticize some of my works, or rather, work in general. I’ve been in the graphic “business” for about a month now, I am 16 years of age and go to school obviously everyday so it leaves hardly no time for my graphic business. I’ve done about 3 websites over the time i’ve spend actaully doing jobs for people. I’m really interested in becoming possibly a graphic designer full time as soon as I graguate college, with a major perhaps in graphic design and a minor in marketing/advertising. If anyone wants to take me in as some type of online intern that would be great, after all, theer is a little more than 5 years before I actaully graguate from college, lol. Here is my site http://www.23-design.com

I’m hoping you guys could tell me some info about my style and any problems you have in general with the site. Remember im still young so I may not factor the things you guys do. Also, if you ahve any advice and, once again, would like me to do some type of internship I’m wide open. Thanks in advance.