Critique Requested!

Heya! Long time listener, first time caller :slight_smile:

I’ve been fiddling around with Flash for a few weeks now, and have mostly been learning to get the hang of all the tools.
(I find it much better than MSPaint.)

Anyway, I decided to try my hand at web design, and I came up with this result. I think it’s pretty good, but I won’t truly know until I get a full critique.

http://www.freewebs.com/zetaspark/personal.html

Harsh criticism and nit-picking is appreciated :wink: Thanks in advance.