Critique this image please!

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[color=black][font=Arial]What do you think of this manip? Totally over the top? It’s for the portfolio site of a photographer that I’m working on. Here’s the link to the original image if you care http://www.dengyldnemynt.com/picture2.jpg [/font][/color]

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