Hi i graduated about a year ago in media design and would like a critique of my personnel web site. I’ve been applying for jobs sine i left and I’m not sure whether its hit the right target with possible employers. Any suggestions would be welcome.
here it is www.flamingpixels.co.uk
thanks
pretty cool, could use some work on the usability side of things, not easy (not hard ) but i thought id mention that it was not really easy to access your work
sori if that doesn make sense im kinda tired ;(
Could you expand by what you mean by the usability not be easy /hard is it to boring
cheers
Hmm nice i like background and text… i cant see any usabiltity problems that zacus mentioned…?
also @hotmail.com isnt too professional try changing that and u’ll be looking good 
hmm looking at it a bit more the header is really big and draws away from what u want it to (the content) try making it smaller ?
just my opinions good luck :thumb:
Beddoes
/edit on your title page it says flammingpixels instead of flaming just a small problem
nah man, does’nt hit the target by far i m sorry to say…
way too simple, something on top tried to load but maybe its my connection, dunno
> change your email add (get a professional one)
> name is flaming pixels and i see everything ice cool there
get some blood red man!!
> everything explained & shown on page 1 :-s
> Attract users by making a hot splash page and then cool navigation.
> sound / music
bring some life into it u know.
I really like the flame u used as a loader, you should use more fire and red throughout the site, the banner is huge and does note give any usefull info, the text is also hard to read. Try changing the background, it looks a little childish. Your site is not bad just not anything new, I am sure since you graduated from media design you can do somthing a lot better.
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