Flyer Review please!

I really like it but I think that the orange doesn’t really fit onto the yellow flower background, sorta opposing colors

i think that the f in frame creation should be capitalized, and the entire phraze should be moved a bit, as it doesn’t seem to sit well, over the edge of the flower pedals. Maybe if you made it bigger, and added a soft Drop Shadow/OuterGlow, it might look a little better…

everything else looks good to me…

yes the word framecreation is a little hard to read, I´ll change that, about making the f capitalized I cant, its part of the logo of the company (I`ll have to convince my brother :P) but thanks for telling me, I´ll play with some colors and change the orange

the frameCreation on the bottom-left corner needs to stand out more :mu:

ur right color, the bottom-left framecreation needs to stand out more, I´ll make the changes

It looks good, but be careful not to overcram the page with text (if you are adding your email etc onto it)!

yeah, hes right…it would be too overwhelming with lots of text…keep it simple :mu:

yes I was thinking the same but I dont know…u guys think I need to add my email, phone number and all that stuff in a flyer??? Its a must or not?

I wouldn’t bother - as long as the information is available at framecreation.com

yes the info is available at the site, I´ll keep it simple then :slight_smile: take a look, I add a small drop shadow to the framecreation at the top, is more visible now, and changed the color of the framecreation at the bottom, more visible now too :slight_smile:

Only if I could read spanish :a:. :run: Opens Dicionario Is that how you spell it :P?

Anyways the colors are great. That yellow always catches my eyes ;).

much better… good job!

lol, close shaf…it´s “diccionario” :wink:

thanks Majeye…
yep i think it looks better but still I think I could make it look better but I dont know what else to do :puzzled:

I dig! Personally though, I’d probobly break up the color of the logo so it’s a bit more clear… like this:

frame[COLOR=“red”]Creation[/COLOR].com

(just different colors)

edit: thanks Reefster. :hangover:

Theres no s in it ;).

that not a bad idea disco, I´ll try, thanks; and yes, there´s no s in there :stuck_out_tongue:

Sweat! catches ones eyes!

I’ve had sweat drop from my head and arms and such but never catches my eye…too small.

It looks really nice, the second one :wink:

Don’t know what else to do with it, but if you have the “something’s missing” feeling, then keep asking for feedback. I know that feeling, and it’s not nice.

yes its weird, still needs something :frowning: but its coming along fine I think :slight_smile: