I want you to critique me please

l have been working on a site for a while. It didnt take me a long while but l changed many times. and here you are… l really dont want to say it is good but it means l am improving.
all ciritique will be appreciated. thanks a lot. By Kirupa l have found the right way thanks also for everyone who takes part in this forum.

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