Laundry detergent

im bored so im workin on this laundry detergent idea… tell me what u think and what i should do to it

eh…it’s okay…still looks too flat. :-\

what do you mean? cuz its all like one color? im kinda goin for the 1950’s or whatever look… its my first try on that style so i gotta do some work on it… im just practicing… but ne ideas would be cool… should i like add foamy stuff comin out of it or something?

If you’re going for a 50’s look then the colors should be more dull looking, what you have now is too bright. And if you really want it to look authentic then throw in a chick from that time era and have her holding the box. Also that idea about adding foam and bubbles wouldn’t be too bad either. =)

yeah i was tryin to go for dull colors but it didnt work too well… ill change that tho… and the chick idea is really good… i just gotta find a good pic of a girl and then make it all spiffy

ok this is what i have now… still workin with it

getting better though, but it’s still to “vectory” for the 50’s look, they didn’t have vector back then so most of the stuff looked like paintings.

oh… well then maybe its vector 50s… did u ever think of that? didnt think so… yeah i suck at stuff at first… ill have it down in like 6 years tho… hmm… what to do oh what to do… oh yeah… here it with a little bit better bubble stuffs

more bubbles!! :stuck_out_tongue:

and add lables to the side and bottom…