Layout check

talk design
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hej peeps,

here i present to you the layout of my first flash site.

main layout

if u have any suggestions, remarks, etc. please let me know
as this is my first “finished” project i really need some feedback

take in mind that the site is not finished yet …
buttons won’t work yet … no bgsound … no content …

just want to know if i’m on right track with fonts, layout, colouring,
etc.

looking forward to ur opinions …

lat0rrrrrrrr

2

very nice i like the spinning logo thats pretty cool i reckon it would be cool if u had the circles in the bottom right moving randomly that would look loads better

p.s whoever that arse it its very pert

-Tom

3

I like the interface concept…

Like the bum too

4

Here are somethings I noticed:

  1. First off, the colors used for your buttons don’t go well with the rest of your layout. You’re basically using primary colors except for the white there, I think it would look better if you used some kind of pastel colors so it would match the green top portions of your navigation box.

  2. The black text in the banner space and content box is a bit hard to read so you might want to change that.

  3. Also I think kirupa’s random circle movement would look nice in that green box with those circle things moving around. Kirupa has something with the same effect that is much smoother.

Overall it’s not too bad, but could still use a lil more work, good luck. =)

5

hej … thnx for remarks …

i have one question … i made swf with random moving circles
( i did it right this time ) when i load it in place the movie does not
play smooth … it behaves in same way as u can see on my site

how come … what do i do wrong ?