Logo draft WIP: Critiques please


2 logos attached for a job I’m working on for a hypnotherapist. They’re reworkings of an existing logo so the concept has to stay the same, ie, an eye. The ‘lashes’ also have to stay because they represent something to the client. They are going for a crisp, clinical look.

Any thoughts?

PS. Might want to move this to the Showcase and Critiques thread, sorry.