New Intro

yo :p:

not much just a small intro for an upcoming design application :slight_smile:

http://www.mrmass.com/MDL/

like it or make a new one?

peace

bit short for an intro

i was expecting something better out of you since you know 3d in flash and you have a good site…
I’ve seen better from you so i would be partisan of ‘make a new one’ :beam:

think the same,…bit short. also i can’t figure out what all the letters about. i mean what is the actual sentence or writing you are trying to achiev. like the sound though. also the fact that you offer the user to leave his address to get informed. great marketing strategy :wink:

hope to give you an idea

cheers
the chameleon

hm,…just subscribed to your newsletter as well - the form seams to work but the typo is not that smooth, is it? think it would look better underneath by using the same font as in the layout.

once more :wink:
the chameleon

Well I think it looks good. I don’t think that an intro needs to be long, as long as it gets your point across… and having not seen the app you can’t really judge if it looks right or not. One thing that I think you should do though is keep the name of the app or whatever that is somewhere. Looks good IMO, quick, simple, and straight to the point.

i think its a bit dark whole intro evreything is too dark

hmm :slight_smile: ah I love this place man…helps me see things!!!

mlk I know its a bit short, when u dont see the site behind it, but when I play it I see it all together it redirect you to the actual site :slight_smile: but hey…not a bad idea to make it 3d once launched :slight_smile:

chameleon…I center the typo once subscribed under the subscribe box…looks better thanks man…I cant really change the font on it cause its php based or I can…have to figure that 1 :slight_smile:

simplistik :slight_smile: I tryed to keep it very simple…simple as your name man :slight_smile: adding a logo to that thing…hmmmm the only place where user can see that intro is from within my site, and there is a small description of the application with a logo, and when u click on it plays this :slight_smile: I think adding logo to intro would be too much unless has a flow within a animation!

Wvd426 I know man I hate dark too :slight_smile: to give u a hint…site is blue and white afterwords…even do dark can be very misterious and interesting depending on what colors you have on your layout :slight_smile: but I agree with you dark alone is scary :slight_smile:

Thank you all…will work on those points!

peace

I like it, personally I hate long intros.

Hate to say it but the texteffect reminds me of swish, I know of course you didn’t use swish to do it, just saying…

But cool :slight_smile:

It’s alright. Just from seeing your site you can do alittle better.

most of my time has been spend into the application :slight_smile: its really not easy :slight_smile: I did intro fast :stuck_out_tongue: thanks u2

you should subscribe and see what will happen next sometimes soon…

peace :stuck_out_tongue: