Hi, I’m working on a poster for this Joe Strummer Tribute show. I’ve only just started on the character art for the poster but I thought i’d put it up any how. The line work needs a bit of fixing though
I think the inside of the lip needs definition- and the shade under the bottom lip should be closer to a dark flesh colour.
It looks horizontally squished.
not bad… maybe you need to consider the outfit colors…
His shirt doesn’t make sense either - it morphs into the collar of the jacket.
Looks like it’s set to 85% xscale and 100% yscale. Really squashed.
Some slight changes, I haven’t done anything to the shirt. Making the nose, mouth, eye brows is annoying
Those features are looking a lot better.
I think you still need to check out the proportions of the cranium to width.
Something more like this would be more natural:
cheers for the critiques.
Here’s the original image im basing it off. I’m gonna start from scratch and redo it as I really dont like what I’ve made and it looks nothing like the original
True.
Scratch.
Redo.
All ze best 
[QUOTE=dravalanche;2354221]cheers for the critiques.
Here’s the original image im basing it off. I’m gonna start from scratch and redo it as I really dont like what I’ve made and it looks nothing like the original
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That image is skewed on the y too by the look of it! shrink it down first before you do anything 
