New site.website critique please..Thanks!

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Hi all,

I’m working on my new website and I would like some feedback.
So far I have done the home page.
Please check out the work in progress at: http://www.busybrain.net/proofing/design/vanSiTe-1.html

Mp3 player it is not working properly yet only play track 1.

Thanks
V :sen:

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I actually like it, i mean its simple fairly neat. But not everything works, its a generic design meaning theres 1000s like it. Its not unique at all. :smiley: Love you

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Hi Thanks for the comment.
Now would you be kind and tell me which one look better:

  1. http://www.busybrain.net/proofing/design/vanSiTe-1.html
    or
  2. http://www.busybrain.net/proofing/design/vanSiTe-2.html

Thanks,
V :link:

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I like no. 1 better - it’s cleaner and more dynamic…