One more time

Blah, dont like it too much, but getting better… CCS please!

::edit:: scroll down for newer versions ::edit::

Here it is:

see edit:)

Peace

There is also a version with a bluish butterfly perched in the top right black area… but I like this one better.

Peace

Much better!!!

But that thing in the center doesn’t really fit… you have sloppiness everywhere, then nice clean bright white lines building a train (?) in the middle :-\

Heres this version, I dunno which I like better…

I kinda liked the contrast of the mess and the lines… here is is without any lines:

I like the last one the best. The one without the lines. I think i is great :slight_smile:

If you look at the second one I changed it with the addition of some color - I like the contrast of the color, but I dont know if I like how I am using it… scroll up and check it out.

Peace

It makes your picture look crooked… I am getting dizzy…lol.

It might be cool if you did that same line thing… but follow the side of the train.

hmmm, I’ll look into it. Thanks for the input so far, I’ll post a new one in a bit.

Peace

Sweet, can’t wait :slight_smile:

I tried the stipes, but they becam too distracting - mainly I just want the color so I went for this two tone look (see second one again)… I’m liking it more, but still not there.

Peace

Yeah, that does look nice :slight_smile:

I hope you keep improving on it :slight_smile: