im not sure if this is the place for this but i thought why not…
here is an animation piece that i have been working on in flash mx… not quite finished yet… but i thought hey why not get some opinions on it, and there is no better place then here… so here goes nothing:
http://home.1asphost.com/rambojesus/caddy.html
let me know what you think… thanks and take care…
there actually IS a better place for it, the site check forum… but at any rate… I think the line drawing is cool, I don’t dig the black bars at the top and bottom and the gradient floating in the middle between them, it seems like there could be a better way to frame it. I think maybe the second car should draw itself on the left side instead of the right side, it seemed a little repetitive.
the black bar stinks. The line draw is pretty sweet. Jazz up the animation by adding a flashing effect or something…really good start even tho it is just an intro…we need more
Kinda short, but a good start, I like the line drawings as well and also agree that it needs more flare.
Your intro also reminds me of the Ford GT intro done by 2a, take a look, maybe it will give you more ideas.
and make it last a bit longer, I had no time to see the thing…