im not sure if this is the place for this but i thought why not…
here is an animation piece that i have been working on in flash mx… not quite finished yet… but i thought hey why not get some opinions on it, and there is no better place then here… so here goes nothing:
there actually IS a better place for it, the site check forum… but at any rate… I think the line drawing is cool, I don’t dig the black bars at the top and bottom and the gradient floating in the middle between them, it seems like there could be a better way to frame it. I think maybe the second car should draw itself on the left side instead of the right side, it seemed a little repetitive.
the black bar stinks. The line draw is pretty sweet. Jazz up the animation by adding a flashing effect or something…really good start even tho it is just an intro…we need more