Opinions please

hey guys i jsut finished my brochure, its a 4 fold legal letter brochure check it out

P.S. the squares are just guides they wont be in the final version

http://www.bmv-interactive.com/front.jpg
http://www.bmv-interactive.com/inside.jpg

any input is welcomed

nice, i like the sepia tone feel used for your 2 images on the front, but when i go to the inside…

it looks totally uncoordinated, like they are 2 totally different pieces. maybe try to get a recurring color scheme there, or something… also, definetly lose that purple crosshair thing under “print”…

also, fix the blurry pxl fonts. other than that, nice work!

Looking very good… but I’m with Liam on all his points. Definitely very professional start though.

thanks for the input guys the blurry fonts ill take care of as for the inside i want to use this since my main focus is creating websites, if you visit my site you can see why i use the icons on the bottom of each section, is in order to maintain continuity with my website

my website: http://www.bmv-interactive.com

p.s. the crosshair is actually a 3d registration mark like the ones used when printing :wink:

i really like the photos in front but ill make the same point: i dont like the window-like feel of the inside…