hello here is my intro for aids awareness ā¦
music or sound will be added soon ā¦ :mu:
http://www.ontheground.be/aids_awareness.html
critics are welcome ā¦
nice one! 
Ohhh, we have a WINNER!!!
Lol, that is very niceā¦ good job. :thumb:
simple yet pretty effective. I have to say, some of the typography is shocking, but it doesnāt really detract.
w00t! very nice!!! 
yeah! itās very nice!!
this is the best one Iāve seen so far =]
One thing, the phrase āAre you sure to be protected?ā seems a bit awkward.
maybe just āare you protected?ā or "are you sure that you are protected?"
just my $0.02.
I agree with drew.
Nice job. Also, the word spacing on the last bit looks a little weird.
Great jorb!! Except I think it isnāt quite 30 seconds long
just a one word ābestā
yup also lovin it!
thanks for all critics ā¦
and thanks for the correction of my english grammarā¦ ( I usually speek french) 
iām working on the sound ā¦
ok the sound is on ā¦
Dude, this is great. The sound does flow with this intro completely.
I suggest making it more āin your faceā because it is an issue that affects us all.
Itās great man!
When you mentioned you speak french, I looked at your location and youāre in Brussels!
Thatās my capital!
Belgium ownz! :love:
:thumb: :beam:
edit: if Iād been smart, I couldāve gotten it from the .be link as well.
ā¦but Iām not :beam:
Very nice job!
I like it alotā¦ Simple but very effective.
You make the music for it?
At first I thought it was the drumline to Rolling Stones āPlease allow me to introduce myselfā I almost shat my pantsā¦ That would of been fly. (meaning the music, not the shat) :p:
nicely done but i think the theme should be about aids awareness (?).
A simple piece of great workā¦
nice work dude!!!