Tshirt design critique

I have proposed a Tshirt design for wearing in our orchestra concert in the school.
There is a text in the design …“Rc Orkestra”…
I need your critiques about the design
I am not an experienced tshirt designer that’s I need especially your constructive comments
At least say something

Thanks…:slight_smile:
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