1st job interview - build a flash website

Hi guys:
I need some criticisms about my flash website, since I need to build a really good website to get the job. (There are other contesters) Right now, I only need to concentrate on the ‘look’.

site:
http://mr.gary.liang.googlepages.com/index.html

My view:

  • Are the colors combination not good enough? A bit boring?
  • I want to build something like those paid templates, but I am just an beginner. But I
    need some improvements on it.
  • I appreciate those excellent tutorials & ppl in the forums… thx

Your views…
I really need criticisms…