Pls check my site too

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im really new with flash or any other webbuild thingy :P, so im sure u guys can gimme advice to do somethings better or nicer.
this is my second site i ever did, but this mayd gonna be the homepage for my boss, so naturally i want it to look good etc :slight_smile:

for the ppl who speak dutch (the site is) the text isnt done yet so dont look for misspellings etc :slight_smile:

ok guys thx in advance

http://members.lycos.nl/pretaurion/test.html

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uhm, is my site so bad u people wanna spare me ur critics, or ?.. lol
please guys, i really want the opinion from pro´s, im new with this and i put allot work in it, maybe i just looked to much to it and dont see somethings that arent good or smthing.
so please look 4 me and tell me good or bad
thx again

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ow maybe it was the footer u didnt like, so for safty i remove it now :stuck_out_tongue:

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Well I guess no one is going to critique this site so I will. Here are the things you need to think about.

  1. Start all over and plan things out. Do some rough sketches on paper before you actually do any work on the comp.

  2. I suggest that you study other peoples work a bit more to get a better idea as to how to build a functional site and how to lay things out.

  3. You need to learn the basics, I suggest that you read the tutorial on how to build a full flash site found here on kirupa.