Ad Critique For Class

Hey guys,

For my advertising class I need to present an ad on a new product I have created. The product is a software which enables you to play poker via your cellular phone. It is called Cellular Flush.

Attached I have attached two slighty varying copies of the ad I came up with. Please give me your suggestions regarding stuff as fonts used, gradiants (or lack there of), background noise, etc. The concept of the ad cannot be changed however (the connection between the two items shown).

Here is the link:
http://filebox.vt.edu/users/rdalicho/ad3.JPG
http://filebox.vt.edu/users/rdalicho/ad2.JPG

Thanks in advance for any help and suggestions you may have.

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