So I made this ad in my design class and I actually got the best of class award for it, trust me when i say it that great of an honor. I was wondering what you all thought of it personally. Few things to say first though, it had to be scaned in because the idea was to make the ad in Indesign (yeah not typical i know) and so i printed it out. Also, the bottom portion of ad is cut off (only a 1/4 of an inch or so), so that border is actually continued at the bottom. hopefully that all made sense. even though i won’t be changing anything i still want your advice on what is wrong (project is sorta old already).
LINK: http://www.forthesound.com/danfrohlich/news/data/upimages/artcardad.jpg
P.S. i created everything on the ad besides the logos for walmart, reader rabbit, and toys r’ us. (Zen Collect is a fake company)