Advert Logo..for TV

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Salaam U Alaykum Kirupa!

Please can you tell me what you think? Where I should go? Its for a Muslim TV channel but the logo will be used in all marketing and all future publications, the target was to be conservative and traditional.

Halal Adverts is a sample splash page.

Thank You Kirupa!

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:tired: You neg I neg

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Hey k4z

I kind of like the idea and the color choice (although the colors are not really relevant for a logo, as it should be representable in black and white as well)

it seems to me, that it is a little bit too busy for a TV logo. I think it would be hard to see those tiny shapes in the corners of the logo. Not everybody has a 70" HDTV. Try to simplify it a little and maybe make the shape a little bit more interesting for the eye, something that is easy recognizable even if you don’t see the whole thing or you are far away. (I know, those points are easier said then done)

hope that helps
Carlo

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Yea it is way to detailed, for a T.V. Screen, you can keep the idea, but simplify it, and like the other guy said you should show it off on with black and white as the colors for a logo.

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Much love guys. Post a new one soon. Its a vector so I could easily enlarge it, was thinking of making it an exploding style animation for the ad but it has to be static. The client is actually ok with it, but I think your right, needs to be “recognisable”. The colour is actually due to the previous branding. What about the text? Thanks.

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yup the logo is too busy

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What does busy mean? Why not Halal Ads?

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Saalam k4z!

I liked your original logo. In fact, if this is for TV, does that mean you’ll have a go at it in After Effects? I can easily imagine the original logo being quite beautiful as a blooming motion graphic. Have you seen the work of belief.com yet? They did a TV CM a while back that did some neat tricks with a mirror effect. I could see that working nicely as an intro with this logo.

The second logo also looks nice, but better suited for a web logo though. Anyhow, nice work!

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I have to admit. The new one looks wicked but it lacks opacity and depth. There is no morals or couture. No warmth or content. Does not represent an adency. Not good for TV due to its continue feeling and its direct approach it lacks flaw and has to much lack of detail and no direction and try dafont for text or some flexfonts. Need to think about your approach and your direction because it even lacks direction and approach