Hello all,
First of all I must say this is my first post and I have been visiting this site forever and a day and there is a tremendous amount of talent around.
I designed two business cards and a logo for a friend of mine (you can see it on the brushed alum card). He is a computer IT administrator so I was going for a techy look.
I would like some critiques please.
thanks.
first of all are these supposed to be normal sized buisness cards? They are a little large. They look great, but a tad too complicated. Take out some of the graphics, like the mesh and random writing and see what happens. Good direction and nice logo.
oh yeah and welcome to the forum!
don’t much care for the Agency FB font.
I like the logo on the second one, but maybe make it a little more smooth looking. A little too busy.
it’s a good start though.