Band Flyer Thingy

I was asked by a friend if I coudl make his band a flyer to hand out, I was given this poor mobile image to work with:

This is what I turned it into:

EDIT: Added a grunge one cause he asked:


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Comments & Critques welcome, apart from if they are pure *** ***** ****