Can I get your critique/advice?

This is a site I’m working on… it’s not finished yet, but a few pages are up.


I don’t know, the main page seems a bit crowded too me. There’s a lot of text, but I can’t take off some of the text… I can only make the page longer.

Same with the about page.

anyway, please let me know what you think of the site so far, and if you have any suggestions.

thanks!! :cool: