CV Critique

Hiya people, I’ve just overhauled my cv, would you please have a look and tell me what you think?

I am not concerned with the look, I need a critique on the writing. Do I sound clever enough? What kind of job/s do you think that would suit? How much $ do I sound entitled to? I am hoping that it’s broad enough to cover design, client-side development and perhaps project management without making me sound like a master of none. :d:

Oh and don’t worry, it’s going to be hosted properly when it’s finished. Geocities is just for the WIP version.

http://www.geocities.com/leisuresuitlissy/cv.html

Thanks
Melissa