Hey guys,
Just wanted to see if anyone can offer any critique on this Flash piece. I’m mostly happy with the general idea, I’m looking more for critique on the details and how to make the overall piece cleaner, smoother, etc…
BTW, I didn’t do the parchment part. All I did was the animation that shows up on the parchment.
http://asiabackpacker.com/clients/gardenco/
Thanks!
Elliott
