First project

1

This is my first project in Flash MX.
The site is far from compleet but i
like some opinions about it.
I know, design isn’t my thing but
how about the menu and action general ?

thanks

http://users.pandora.be/onscreen/index.html

2

nice site. good work

some things :-

1)- center your green main menu
2)- Maybe chaneg your men color
3)- Make a preloader

:smirk: nice

3

i’m missing an option to turn off the music,
furthermore i’d prefer one color scheme and at max. three different fonts, that would make the site more clearly. e. g. one font for the content, one for the menu and one for the titles or so.
i can’t get the sence of the map at the beginning as well.
and in my opinion there are too many optical effects with too little reasonable effect.
but respect, i’ve seldomly seen a first flash website like this :slight_smile:

4

I don’t get the whole ‘n, e, d, f’ thing you got going on.

5

me neither

6

users.pandora.be … Nog belgen hier :wink:

I don’t actually see the point of those numbers indicating the mouse position, the time indication and the info page. Every comp already tells the time, your site doesn’t have to. And most people know their O/S, resolution and especially O/S language. And yeah, what’s up with the n d e f thingy ?

The windows in the contact section are a little small, and thus hard to read. In the section Raadgeving (Advice), there is a lot of unused space underneath the text, but the scroller also scrolls it.

In Constructie (Construction): the image is nice, but the angle menu shouldn’t dissapear after you’ve clicked it. And IMO, it should also already be there when you enter the section. Oh I see now, you have to rollOver. Make sure they don’t dissapear when clicked.

En Renovatie werkte niet voor mij :-\

7

thanks for your reactions.

to clear some things :

  • the date,time,x-y pos of menu and the map are just for info.

  • the map is there to point out the regio where the company
    is located in France.the routeplanner give’s you an accurate route .

  • the INFO section will give info about the company and a privacy statement : what data we collect ; ip,system,language,…
    what you see now is just finding out what we can collect

If someone has a script about collecting user info, i’m thankfull
if you mail them.

e,d,f,n stands for

n : nederlands ( dutch )
f : francais
d : deutsch
e : english

depending on the browser language the visitor is redirected to
the matching language. ( site will be translated when it’s done therefor the same site you see at the moment)

to see the options in each framespage move over the lightsign
(right upper corner)

the visitor will get a popup once about this. ( working on it )

to stop the music : click on the music display.

thanks once again and I’ll consider your help.

o, the menu is indeed not centered, have some problem with this