like the damage/worn effect on the magazine, table looks ok, girl looks hot but she doesn’t look worn or damaged like the rest of the magazine…if the magazine is supposed to be a vintage pulp magazine say from the 50’s her pic looks like it was taken last week, not sure what you can do to recitify that and to be honest I’m probably being really picky
I dont like the background. The colors are competing with the magazine so it’s not popping the way it should.
Also agree with above, girl looks out of place and not worn enough like the rest of the magazine.
I think with a little more work at the piece you can get to where you want to be with it because it’s ALMOST there but not quite yet!