hi,
this is a logo i’ve developed for a day spa… aiming to convey peacefulness, relaxation, nature, etc.
there’s a few things i’m worried about for it, so comments would be great.
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The font i used: I think it looks quite neat, but i’m just worried that it will be a bit too corporate, perhaps not creating the desired feel. But, i was thinking about other possibilities, and i think a more ‘organic’ font might look too sloppy or something.
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it feels a bit long - the logo with all the text underneath ends up being quite a long block… hope people understand what i mean. I was thinking of perhaps putting the text a bit higher, even overlapping it with the stem of the leaf.
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also with the text… i wanted it to be an even block, so i had to make the word “glen” bigger so they’d all be even width. Is there any way i can make them aligned without placing emphasis on the word?
C & C welcome, thanks 
Stu
