Hope I've up-ed my game

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If some of you remember a while ago I made a site for my cousin.Took onboard your advice and I just want to see if there are a few more improvements I need to make

here is the link http://www.freewebs.com/rudm

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didn’t see the first one but its not bad
at least its better than something i would have done but i have to comment
using ms outlook for sending mail is kinda outdated - add a web form in the site
plus add some thing - animation, pictures - anything on the left side its too empty

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I cant read the text, play with the contrast a little.

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ok will edit the css file in a mo.Should I bring up the contrast

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did some modiz in the css

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much better. Antoehr thing is the bar that hovers under menu items doesn’t line up correctly:)

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I think I messed up on the reg point for that movie clip.Should have put it in the center I think.But still having trouble trying to figure out code to make the scroll bar proportionate to the amount of text ,that is if there is less text it should be bigger.Any ideas? also how do I make a form for the contact section.Don’t know nothing bout php

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fixed the line up issue

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many of the random lines make the site look unpolished rather than tech-y

for very small text you should be using pixel fonts, i can barely read the “designed and maintained” line on 1280x1024

it’s not properly centered

you’ve misspelled “writer”

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oh man ;( now I have to go do the graphics againg.

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LOl what’s with the huge empty space on the left?

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I am trying to make the mail form using the example given on this site but its not working.I am using a free host called freewebs.com .Will that affect how it works.Any ideas???

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you wont be able to do a contact form because it uses PHP and freewebs dont allow PHP scripts to run on thier servers

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oh s-hit