I'm Making Cigarettes!

[size=1]Hello all,

Just wanted to get some feedback… For my graphic design grad project I’m creating a new line of Canadian cigarettes (hence the warnings) that target the more masculine + refined market - sold at a premium price, of course.

Please note that this is just the beginning. I think this one (my first experiment) might be a bit too busy… Keep in mind it’s a flattened view and you would not (looking at it straight on) see the ‘Toxic Constituents’ or the ‘Barcode’ side…

My experimentation will continue. Please let me know what you think - but only constructive criticism please, as this is just the very beginning of a long journey.

Here they are:

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Sincerely,
Mark (decisionman)
[email protected]
http://www.mark-stuckert.net
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